The ‘before jumping out at soldiers and ‘to jump out at soldiers’ have things wrong with them and i dont know jow to fix them, because when i had it as ‘Instead of going from south forests to far southern forests: Say “blah blah blah”; end the game in death and if you enterd this area you no matter what died, how do i fix this?

“Green” by ~Fubb

When play begins: Say “In the land of Aesriel, far to the south of the Great Forests, there is a farm, where a boy lives alone in. This boy is one of two people that holds the power to unlocking a secret crypt that could either save the world, or destroy it…”

The Farm House is a room. “Your bed is at the far end of the farm house and the kitchen is in the middle of the room. A Fire place lays in the corner comfortabily, and rays of warm sunlight shine in through the windows and roofs.”

The Yard is south of the Farm House. “Your greeted by warm wind as your enter your yard, eyeing the surrounding forests and fields of yours. Something could be heard in the bushes to the far south.”

The Forest Edge is south of the Yard. “Trees are scattered about here as they get thicker farther south into the forests, sounds can be heard here. The Yard and Farm House are north of here.”

The South Forests is south of the Forest Edge. “Trees are thicker here, and your farm house has almost dissapeared from site. Noise can be heard from the south and the forest edge, the yard, and your farm house are north from here.”

the Far Southern Forests is south of the South Forests. “A Band of soldiers is here, trudging through the bushes on there way north, you hide behind a tree carefull not to get caught. It appears they are going to your home. If you run back now you could easily pack up all your bags and make an escape, though if you jump out to surprise them, you will surely die.”

The Soldiers is a person. “The soldiers are heavily armed, in silver armour, and there is a hooded men leading them.”

If jump out at soldiers: Say “You jump out at the pack of soldiers and yell at them, only to be cut down by a well-aimed arrow to the heart.”; end the game in death.

before going to the Farm House, award one point.

before jump out at soldiers, remove one point.

Every turn:
if the score is greater than 0, end the game in victory.